Thursday, June 6, 2013
The Jane Comic Series, Issue #2 Script
Part 2 of a 2 Part Story-Arc:
Issue #2 . Jordan Weaver . Page 1
CAP:
4 days after her shoot with Sweetside Magazine …
Panel 1: Jane decides to find herself an agent who will take care of all the offers. She finds that agent, in Kurt James.
KURT:
Miss Allen, as I’m sure you know, you are now a very popular figure in this town, and are probably the biggest athlete to ever be in this place. There are a lot of offers here, I will review them and decide which seem good, and which are not worth it. I’ll let you know in a few days.
JANE:
Good, I really need to get back to my workout, I feel so weak … like everyone else, I feel like a wimp …. Time to hit the gym.
Panel 2: Jane arrives at the gym, and does a few hours on the treadmill, and just as she is finishing with that, her phone rings.
SFX:
Janes cell phone ringing ….
JANE:
Hello …
KURT:
Miss Allen, its Kurt James here, among the offers here is a TV show offer, you would be the lead character … I feel you need to review it, it may be something worth the time. I will forward the details.
Panel 3: Jane arrives home, and goes to her laptop to review the details, a lead role in a TV show, similar to ‘Speed Racer’ , except she would use her feet, and her speed would be exaggerated … the title is ‘She-Speedster’. She decides to meet with the executives.
CAP:
TV Network Head Office ….
Issue #2 . Jordan Weaver . Page 2
EXECUTIVE:
Miss Allen, we are prepared to make you the lead star, you can read the terms of the offer in the contract in front of you.
JANE:
I’m sorry … this is below me … I’m the biggest thing to ever be seen in this wimpy little town. My career is worth more then this crappy TV show.
Panel 4: The executive stands up in shock, but before he can make them leave, Kurt tries to make it right.
KURT:
Listen, listen, my client is clearly expecting a little more, is there any way to make it happen?
EXECUTIVE:
Yes, I should tell you that Miss Allen is the only one the company wants in this role, they believe she is the perfect fit. Therefore I am prepared to double the offer on that sheet.
Panel 5: Jane immediately smiles, and shakes his hand, and the deal is done. Its not long afterwards that her arrogance once again makes an appearance.
Panel 6: Jane arrives home, and posts on social media about how she is bigger then the show she is leading, and she is the reason the show will succeed.
CAP:
45 minutes later ….
SFX:
Jane phone rings …..
EXECUTIVE:
Miss Allen, after much review, and seeing your social media pages, we are making our offer null and void, we will seek a new actress. Thank you.
Panel 7: Jane sits in with a blank look. The offer of a lifetime, the chance to make a lot of money … and she just tossed it all away because of her huge ego.
CAP:
Her career as a track and field star is essentially over, and her TV career never got started … Jane decides to leave Sweetside and start fresh, in a small place called Lanville Township.
Jane Allen Artwork #2
Another version of Jane, with the orange spandex suit which is mentioned in the first script posted here. More Artwork at a later date.
Jane Allen Artwork #1
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This was the original drawing of the character, and originally she had a sidekick ... which is the not outline character beside her.
The Jane Comic Series, Issue #1 Script
Part 1 of a 2 Part Story-Arc:
Issue #1 . Jordan Weaver . Page 1
CAP:
Jane Allen is just an ordinary woman ... .well not entirely ... she is actually a superstar track and field runner ... with super speed never seen before.
Panel 1: Jane Allen stands in the middle of the track, the bright sun shining down on her, as today is like all others, another day of training, after this she heads to the gym.
JANE:
Lets get this underway, a nice 3 hour training session here on the track.
CASEY:
Lets do it.
Panel 2: She begins with a bang, she takes off, using her speed and blasting around the track, even lapping her partner.
JANE:
What’s wrong? … cant keep up?
CASEY:
…
SFX:
The wind blowing through the trees, The sound of shoes running on the track.
CAP:
2 and a half hours later.
Panel 3: Jane finally slows down, eventually stopping completely and sits down to rest, as her partner is now long gone, unable to keep up.
JANE:
These people they pair with me are weak … cant even keep up.
Panel 4: Jane arrives home, and quickly changes from her shorts and tank top, into some under armour , she heads to the gym.
Panel 5: Jane arrives at the gym, and heads right for the leg machines, making sure to increase the amount she lifts everyday, to make her legs stronger and better.
GYM RAT:
Hey you wanna play soccer at the park in a few ?
Issue #1 . Jordan Weaver . Page 2
JANE:
Yeah sure … I’ll meet you there …
CAP:
1 hour later …
Panel 6: Immediately after finishing her workout, Jane changes into her shorts and t-shirt and heads to the park down the road. She arrives and joins a small game of soccer.
SFX:
The sound of kids yelling
Panel 7: 20 minutes into playing Jane gets injured badly, her leg is bent in an awkward direction. She falls to the grass in agony.
CAP:
Local Hospital …
Panel 8: Jane is told her leg is fine, but any major stress put on it could cause damage. Jane takes the advice, but in her mind knows she is still entering the big race.
Panel 9: She spends the rest of her night doing light stretches and keeping her leg moving to prevent it from becoming stiff. She also prepares for another intense workout tomorrow.
CAP:
The next morning …
Panel 10: Jane wakes up to severe pain in her leg, but pushes on, putting on her same clothes and shoes and heading for the track for another 3 hour session.
JANE:
I just had to play soccer, now I have to do this race with a sore leg …. Damn clumsy kids, cant even play soccer right.
CAP:
The day of the big race …..
Issue #1 . Jordan Weaver . Page 3
Panel 11: Jane arrives at the track, ready to go, her leg still sore, but she has her brand new orange spandex singlet, and new yellow running shoes. She receives her number and the town she is representing, ‘Sweetside’.
SFX:
The sound of the crowd yelling and cheering, and the horn to begin the race …
CAP:
10 minutes left in the race …
Panel 12: The group approaches the finish, and Jane is in second place, well ahead of the third place, but far behind first. She tries to get more speed, but her leg holds her back. She passes the finish, coming in second, the small town of Sweetside could not be more proud.
CAP:
The next day ….
Panel 13: Janes second place finish has suddenly made her a darling to the townspeople. She is now the center of all media, and soon becomes too busy with media to continue training, and soon loses her workout routine.
Panel 14: Jane is soon surprised to hear from a local agency looking to do a shoot with her, and the offer they make her is one she can not refuse. The attention and media only adds to her already inflated ego, and the arrogance that has driven all her friends away from her.
Issue #1 . Jordan Weaver . Page 1
CAP:
Jane Allen is just an ordinary woman ... .well not entirely ... she is actually a superstar track and field runner ... with super speed never seen before.
Panel 1: Jane Allen stands in the middle of the track, the bright sun shining down on her, as today is like all others, another day of training, after this she heads to the gym.
JANE:
Lets get this underway, a nice 3 hour training session here on the track.
CASEY:
Lets do it.
Panel 2: She begins with a bang, she takes off, using her speed and blasting around the track, even lapping her partner.
JANE:
What’s wrong? … cant keep up?
CASEY:
…
SFX:
The wind blowing through the trees, The sound of shoes running on the track.
CAP:
2 and a half hours later.
Panel 3: Jane finally slows down, eventually stopping completely and sits down to rest, as her partner is now long gone, unable to keep up.
JANE:
These people they pair with me are weak … cant even keep up.
Panel 4: Jane arrives home, and quickly changes from her shorts and tank top, into some under armour , she heads to the gym.
Panel 5: Jane arrives at the gym, and heads right for the leg machines, making sure to increase the amount she lifts everyday, to make her legs stronger and better.
GYM RAT:
Hey you wanna play soccer at the park in a few ?
Issue #1 . Jordan Weaver . Page 2
JANE:
Yeah sure … I’ll meet you there …
CAP:
1 hour later …
Panel 6: Immediately after finishing her workout, Jane changes into her shorts and t-shirt and heads to the park down the road. She arrives and joins a small game of soccer.
SFX:
The sound of kids yelling
Panel 7: 20 minutes into playing Jane gets injured badly, her leg is bent in an awkward direction. She falls to the grass in agony.
CAP:
Local Hospital …
Panel 8: Jane is told her leg is fine, but any major stress put on it could cause damage. Jane takes the advice, but in her mind knows she is still entering the big race.
Panel 9: She spends the rest of her night doing light stretches and keeping her leg moving to prevent it from becoming stiff. She also prepares for another intense workout tomorrow.
CAP:
The next morning …
Panel 10: Jane wakes up to severe pain in her leg, but pushes on, putting on her same clothes and shoes and heading for the track for another 3 hour session.
JANE:
I just had to play soccer, now I have to do this race with a sore leg …. Damn clumsy kids, cant even play soccer right.
CAP:
The day of the big race …..
Issue #1 . Jordan Weaver . Page 3
Panel 11: Jane arrives at the track, ready to go, her leg still sore, but she has her brand new orange spandex singlet, and new yellow running shoes. She receives her number and the town she is representing, ‘Sweetside’.
SFX:
The sound of the crowd yelling and cheering, and the horn to begin the race …
CAP:
10 minutes left in the race …
Panel 12: The group approaches the finish, and Jane is in second place, well ahead of the third place, but far behind first. She tries to get more speed, but her leg holds her back. She passes the finish, coming in second, the small town of Sweetside could not be more proud.
CAP:
The next day ….
Panel 13: Janes second place finish has suddenly made her a darling to the townspeople. She is now the center of all media, and soon becomes too busy with media to continue training, and soon loses her workout routine.
Panel 14: Jane is soon surprised to hear from a local agency looking to do a shoot with her, and the offer they make her is one she can not refuse. The attention and media only adds to her already inflated ego, and the arrogance that has driven all her friends away from her.
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